try starting your sentence with the ed form of the verb. H makes for a punchy start to a sentence.
Remember the rule: When you have finished your ed phase, place a comma then write a test of the sentence.
Some- ed words - Surprised, excited, angered, possessed, committed, electrified, Horrified
Examples: "determined to win Tony pushed himself in the last meters of the sprint."
"Concerned for the well-being of the others, the prime minister passed new laws. "
"Committed to working, she focused really hard to complete the work "
Angered by a classmate, I punched a pillow in my room.
Horrified by a ghost, I quickly ran away.
Shocked by the sound, I fell off my chair.
Surprised by the visit of my brother, I ran and hugged him.
Determined to be successful in all my subjects, I stayed up till 3:00 am studying.
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In the "power" sentence
if you waffle a lot of your writing, try using a power sentence. Begin your paragraph with a power sentence of 12 words or less. Get straight to the point.
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In the "power" sentence
if you waffle a lot of your writing, try using a power sentence. Begin your paragraph with a power sentence of 12 words or less. Get straight to the point.
Examples:
"Money is the most of all evil"
"What is right, isn't always popular"
Friends aren't always true to each other.
Athletics is tiring.
Alexis is Joseph's lost sister.
Alexis has a crush on someone.
Pineapple on pizza is disgusting,
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