Essay Brainstorm

 Essay Brainstorm

The "W" Sentence, try starting your sentence with a "w" word. These sentences make your work sound thoughtful & Knowledgable.

Remember the rule: not every "w" word works as a sentence starter. remember to put your comma in when the parts of the sentence affected by your "w" are finished.

Some "w" words you can use: who, while, whilst, whereas, when, where, what, with, whom.

Example: Whilst the teacher was talking, the students were pretending to listen. 

With a majority of the vote, Hitler seized power.

 When the bell rings, we run to the class.

Must do 2-3: 

When eating a piece of cake, the girl suddenly choked desperately. Whereas she had her friend help her pat her back to stop her from choking, she was saved. 

With the most votes for being a representative as the class president, Rheane was pressured into making difficult decisions.

While staring at the glistening stars, fireworks had appeared in the sky.

Should do 4-6

Whilst sleeping really late, the girl had to face the consequences of getting late the next day.

What Chloe did was unacceptable, leaving her to face a harsh punishment from the school.

When lying in his death bed, Sam and Lucas were beside him all day long.

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The "ing" sentence

Try starting the sentence with the -ing form of the verb.

Remember the rule: When you have finished your -ing phase, place a comma, then write the rest of the sentence.

Sane words you can use: Listening, Watching, running, reciting, realizing, engaging, grasping, speaking, etc)

Example: realising the danger, people fled from the others. Shaking away the nerves, he approached the microphone. Emergency from the water, the swimmer was greeted with cheers.

Must do 2-3 

Starring in a movie was Jane's dream, now that she's older her dream has changed.

Lying down in the grass, he felt something bite him.

Speaking in public was Jack's worst fear, recently he overcame that fear.

Should do 4-6

Standing in front of the stage his eyes glistened, slowly looking at his surroundings.