Music DLO 27/5/19
LO: Create a piece of writing that describes a place or a setting inspired by this song( I don’t have a song since i wasn’t here so ya).
A War within Mewni
As I went outside and saw People running and screaming in terror, destroyed homes. Guards fighting for their kingdom, People dying, fire spreading everywhere. I ran to the castle and tried to find the King and Queen but nowhere to be found. Their were Broken items like ripped photos of their family, broken walls and shattered lights. I Heard fighting from the top floor…….
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