How To fix a simple sentences using...
How to fix a simple sentences using an adjective and when, where, How and why here is an example of what we did in our new Hurumanu music, Normal to Descriptive
Normal: She played the guitar.
Adjective: She played the loud guitar.
when: In the afternoon she played the loud guitar.
where: In the afternoon she played the loud guitar inside her bedroom.
How: In the morning she played the loud guitar inside her bedroom, singing a sad song.
why: In the morning she played the loud guitar inside her bedroom, singing a sad song because her dad passed away.
I hope this was helpful to some of you guys and I do know that some of you know this but it's for helping people who don't know this.
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. I am a year 9 in 2021. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, April 8, 2019
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Kamusta Zoe! I like your post because you put details in your post. I also like the way you labelled it each sentence like "Normal: ..." because It's easier to read. But Perhaps next time, you could add some photos that are related to your post, but overall It's a great post!
ReplyDeleteHave a great day!