I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. I am a year 9 in 2021. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, August 25, 2017
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Kia ora my name is Hannah and I am from South Hornby School. I love the way you did the dots in your art work. Your slideshow reminds me of the time I made my first slideshow. Next time could you put pictures in your writing and can you make sure put the text in the right colour so people can read it properly. How do you get the cool tables to write in?
ReplyDeleteHey its Hollie from South Hornby School. I love the background and the unicorns on the slide, they remind me of going to the magic shows. I really like your art work too. To improve you could make the words a little bit bigger to read but the rest was cool. Maybe you could make slide go slower to read all the words on slide 3.
ReplyDeleteHey Zoe it's Yvette from South Hornby School. I like your art and work because the background and colours are pretty. This reminds me of a rainbow. To improve you could slow it down a little bit. how did you make the dot art work ?
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